Poems (Simile + Metaphor)

During our last term we’ve been learning about poetry using similes and metaphors.
My topic was about my dog that got hanged in a car. I miss him very much. His name is Sox.
It was quite easy to write, for I like deep things. I know a few sad words.
Here are the poems I wrote. I hope you like them.






Sox as teen.

Them as puppies, Sox is the one on the left.

His Brother, Spot

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